My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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Sir Allan Newlight(imported)
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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When i go to the center of forest i seen ruins of Castle and Backpack of my brother.
Me - Hey Tampala. My brother been here!
Tampala - Do not kiding! You brother doesn't get key to secret Antena Tree.
Me - But i found him backpack!
I sudenly seen smal black dog.
Me - Hey. Kacper come here.
This dog come to my hand's and strat licking.
Me - Don't lick dogy. Well..... Tampala. This is my dog named Kacper.
Tampala - Hello Kacper. My name is Tampala.
Kacper start barking.
Me - Kacper. Stop! This is my friend.
Tampala - Well.... <He start crying> He don't like me!
Me - Oh Tampala. Don't Cry. My dog didyn't seen you beafore. You been in him eye's an Enemy. But some time further will been your friend.
Tampala - You think?
Me - Yes. Well...... Where now been my brother? Hmmm.........
Sudenly was apeared Waywolf.
Waywolf - Hello human. You said about searching for you brother.
Me - Yes. Well.... You known my brother. Patric Książek.
Waywolf - WHAT!!! PATRIC KSIĄŻEK FROM SABANARA GROUP?
Me - Yes. I will find him.
Waywolf - You are also member of Sabanara group?
Me - No! I don't want cut off all Antena Tree's. I would like get a lot of new friends on this wrold.
Waywolf - Well.... You will get my number?
Me - Yea! Sure. <I GOT WAYWOLF NUMBER>
Waywolf - Well... Sit in my back. From sky you will find your brother!
Me - Ok <I sit on Waywolf Back with Tampala> Ok. Let's fly!
And i flow into Waywolf back for search my brother!
Sir Allan Newlight(imported)
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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From the sky i seen my brother.
Me - Land here.
Waywolf - Ok!
He was landed in the high grass.
Me - Patric. What are you doing here without Key to secret Antena Tree.
Patric - Well...... You don't close the door.
Me - Ups! What do you want doing in this island?
Patric - I will awake E-Mon Brothers. Shade and Shin. I need for this special Propeler but i lost my backpack.
Me - I found it <Gave my brother Backpack>.
Patric - Good. Come with me!
I go with my brother and Tampala to the top of Azure Tower.
Me - SHADE AND SHIN! Wich of this Electric Monsters been my friend.
Patric - I don't know. But i think if you friend been Shade.
<I start those propeler><Two Electric Monsters was awake>
Shade - Who you are human's?
Me - I am Bartek. Him is my Brother Patric. We will been your friend's.
Shin - Well..... Ok. I would been your friend Patric.
Shade - Well.... Batek. I seen if you been good friend. Take my number <I GOT SHADE NUMBER>
Patric - <He got Shin Number> I have a question.
Shin - What?
Patric - I can fly in your back?
SHin - Yea. Sure.
<I WITH BROTHER FLOW AWAY ON THE SHADE AND SHIN TO TULUNK VILIGE!>
Sir Allan Newlight(imported)
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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When i land in the Tulunk Villige i seen one boy.
Me - Hello! Who you are.
Blaziken(257) - I am Blaziken.
Me - I'am Bartek. Well....... Your name look like Pokemon Name.
Blaziken(257) - This is my nickname. I can't say you my real name.
Me - Ok.
I'am going to Tulunk Fountain with my brother. When i throught the long corridor i seen gate when was write <T-MIDLEY ENTREACE>
Me - Patric? What is T-Midley?
Patric - T-Midley is the best E-Monsters trainer.
Me - Trainer? Well...... But Electric Monsters don't been Pokemon's!
Patric - Sure. But some bad peoples using Electric Monsters look like Pokemons.
Me - Poor E-Monsters. Well.......
I was run out from the Tulunk Fountain Cave and on Shade back i flow to Palan City. In there i go to Fakiake Home.
Me - Hello Fakiake. I have one question for you!
Fakiake - What did you want?
Me - Do you give me key to Antena Tree who lead to Liz Island. I must stop the T-Midley master!
Fakiake - Well...... <HE GAVE ME KEY> OK! GO!
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

Post by Sonic_Girl(imported) »

This story, I reread my post and realized that it could have been made out to be an insult, I'm sorry if I offended anyone and I meant that I would pust the story in a format that would be eaiser to understand for people who are more expericened in english.
Sir Allan Newlight(imported)
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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Thank's Sonic Girl. I try make this story more better. <Blaziken in my story is not Pokemon, is Person>

Now I give him a one-on-brother Shade Alice flew to the village. He came in from the sea Baun. Sailed calmly on Mantei dopłynąłem to a small quiet islands.
Me - Hmmm ........ Previously, the island not seen here.
Mantea - This is an island Wichrowe. He hides in the basement of a valuable item.
I - Well, great.
I found the entrance to the underworld. At the bottom I heard Tsubake.
Tsubake - God damn door. That also does not want to fucking open. About Bartek. I see that you also przywiało here. But it does not go forward because the door is closed.
I - Easy < I open locked door >!
Tsubake - Excellent!
We have entered into the measure. I now I caught a T-shoot. When it was the card that says
"The phone has to be among the best T-Midley"
I - Super! I have the T-shoot. So now I will be easier to stop the T-Midley master.
Tsubake - You know ..... This glup matter. As you have his phone so now you are the best.
I - What? Well ..... So I have it. I am the same.
Tsubake - This looks like.
At the time, came Shade.
Shade - Bartek. We have a problem.
I - What is it?
Shade - When Mikeye lake Patric came in Chap trap.
I - Oh, shit. <Get out with Shade from Underground> Good.
Flew in the direction of Lake Mikey!
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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Atecain wrote: Thank's Sonic Girl. I try make this story more better. <Blaziken in my story is not Pokemon, is Person>

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I know about the Blazikan part. You sure you don't want me to convert the story from broken english to regular english, I really don't mind.
Sir Allan Newlight(imported)
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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wrote:I know about the Blazikan part. You sure you don't wnat me to convert the story from broken english to regular english, I really don't mind.
You can do it? Well..... If you want. I've been happy!!!
Sonic_Girl(imported)
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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Yo, check your inbox Antecain, the 1st part to the story is there, and so is a link to some telefang music for your game.
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Atecain wrote: You can do it? Well..... If you want. I've been happy!!!
Can I have a go at it as well?
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Re: My Story in Electric Monster Wrold

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andwhyisit wrote:
Atecain wrote: You can do it? Well..... If you want. I've been happy!!!
Can I have a go at it as well?
I don't have a problem with it, ask him in a pm since he isn't on right now. I got the hard thing done, that was going on racieb's site and getting the pics of the denjuu and getting the japanese name with the bootleg name, I'm just waiting for him to respond to my pms.
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