Can anyone help me solve this engrish issue?

[andwhyisit]

I am slowly getting this text from the rom using the text patch, problem is that not all of the text is fixed since there is still engrish text in there and I would like to only have to edit the pointers once and move on to the next set of text, so can anyone help me clean up the engrish?

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<B1><LINE>Arrived!<END05>
Strength<LINE>recovered!<END05>
<60><LINE>É<B1>Ê<END05>
Got the phone<LINE>number of<LINE><60>!<END05>
<60><LINE>É<B1>Ê<END05>
<60> was<LINE>defeated!<END05>
I can't defeat<LINE>him!<END05>
<60><LINE>escaped!<END05>
<60><LINE>Please don't<LINE>strolled on the<LINE>road!<END05>
The number of<LINE><E1C9> was<LINE>lost!<END05>
The e-magic<LINE>power can't be<LINE>opened!<END05>
<B1><LINE>appeared!<END05>
The e-magic<LINE>power begins to<LINE>charge!<END05>
<60> attack<LINE><B1><END04>
Please select<LINE>E-monster.<END04>
Game Over<END05>
Caught the<LINE>E-monster!<END05>
Escaped!<END05>
Regret,<LINE>Didn't catch!<END05>
Was defeated!<END05>
<48> points lost!<END04>
The enemy was<LINE>beat down!<END05>
The attack from<LINE>ourselves!<END05>
<60> got <48><LINE>Exp. Points!<END05>
The grade of<LINE><60> raised<END05>
<60><LINE>evolved!<END05>
Became<LINE><60>!<END05>
Attacked, but<LINE>failed to hit!<END04>
Attack which<LINE>Denjuu?<END05>
<60> used<LINE><B1>!<END04>
<CHOICE> Are you sure?<LINE>  Yes   No<END04>
<60> didn't<LINE>follow!<END05>
<60><LINE>attacked freely<END04>
Barrya edged<LINE>e-magic power<LINE>out!!<END05>
Go! <B1>!<END05>
Didn't escape!<END05>
Which e-monster<LINE>'s position<LINE>would you like<LINE>to see?<END05>
<CHOICE>  Fight   Escape<LINE> Stats<END04>
The speed of<LINE><60><LINE>improved!<END05>
The accuracy<LINE>of <60><LINE>improved!<END05>
The evasion of<LINE><60><LINE>improved!<END05>
The attack<LINE>ability of<LINE><60><LINE>improved!<END05>
The e-magic<LINE>power of<LINE><60><LINE>improved!<END05>
The defense<LINE>ability of<LINE><60><LINE>improved!<END05>
The health of<LINE><60><LINE>recovered!<END05>
Poison damaged!<END05>
Failed!<CHOICE> å 9<END04>
The skill is<LINE>not enough!<END05>
<CHOICE> Call mate?<LINE>  Yes   No<END04>
<CHOICE> Didn't call the<LINE>mate!<END05>
Grasp the skill<LINE>of <60>!<END05>
<60><LINE>Got lost!<END05>
<60> hide!<END05>
<60><LINE>jump!<END05>
<60><LINE>is flying!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>very confused!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>paralytic! <END05>
<60> was<LINE>being cursed!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>asleap!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>afraid!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>surrounded by<LINE>fog!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>hurt by poison!<END05>
The eyes of<LINE><60> can't<LINE>see something<LINE>clearly!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>building the<LINE>barrior!<END05>
<60> burst!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>frostbitten!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>scalede!<END05>
<60><LINE>appeared!<END05>
<60> landed!<END05>
<60><LINE>returned!<END05>
<60> became<LINE>sober from<LINE>confusion!<END05>
The paralysis<LINE>of <60><LINE>was cured!<END05>
The curse of<LINE><60> was<LINE>released!<END05>
<60> woke<LINE>up from fog!<END05>
<60> re-<LINE>covered to the<LINE>attack state!<END05>
The frog around<LINE><60><LINE>disappeared!<END05>
The poison of<LINE><60><LINE>disappeared!<END05>
The eyes of<LINE><60> cansee something!<END05>
The barrier of<LINE><60> is no<LINE>longer in<LINE>force!<END05>
The blood-block<LINE>of <60><LINE>disappeared!<END05>
The frostbite of<60> was<LINE>cured!<END05>
The burn of<LINE><60><LINE>was cured!<END05>
<60> hide!<END05>
<60> jumped<LINE>very highly!<END05>
<60> flied<LINE>in the sky!<END05>
<60><LINE>is confused!<END05>
<60><LINE>is paralyzed! <END05>
<60> was<LINE>being cursed!<END05>
<60><LINE>was asleap! <END05>
<60><LINE>was afraid!<END05>
<60><LINE>was surrounded<LINE>by fog!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>hurt by poison!<END05>
<60> closed<LINE>the eyes!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>building the<LINE>barrier!<END05>
The blood-block<LINE>of <60><LINE>swelled!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>frostbitten!<LINE>Defense ability<LINE>fell.<END05>
<60> was<LINE>scalede! Attack<LINE>ability full!<END05>
Save?<LINE>  Yes   No<END04>
The phone no.<LINE>of <60><LINE>was saved!<END05>
The phone<LINE>number was not<LINE>saved!<END05>
I want to<LINE>somewhere by<LINE>the way,and I<LINE>will return<LINE>late!<END04>
I'm sorry!I got<LINE>lost!I will be<LINE>late!<END04>
Got <48> ball!<END05>
It seems the<LINE>enemy's mate<LINE>will late!<END04>
Call <48> Denjuu!<LINE>SEL- View Stats<END04>
e-wave can<LINE>not transmit!<END05>
I tell you my<LINE>phone number!<END05>
Got a call from<LINE><E1C9>!<END04>
But, the memory<LINE>was full and<LINE>can't log on!!<END05>
It's not very<LINE>effective...<END05>
It's super-<LINE>effective!<END05>
<B1><LINE>wants to fight!<END05>
<CHOICE> Wait for<LINE>communication!<END04>
Communication<LINE>defeat!<END05>
Communication<LINE>end!<END05>
Please select<LINE>the dealing<LINE>e-monster!<END04>
Communications<LINE>mode is wrong!<END05>
VS fight can't<LINE>go on!!<END05>
If VS fight goeson, more than 3<LINE>e-monsters were<LINE>needed!!<END05>
VS fight is OK<END05>
The bargaining<LINE>can't go on!<END05>
There are no<LINE>e-monsters can<LINE>be bargained!<END05>
Bargain is OK!!<END05>
The memory of D<LINE>ball is full!!<END05>
Please select<LINE>communication<LINE>mode!<END05>
Please select <LINE>music need<LINE>transmit!<END04>
Do you call me?<LINE>  Yes   NoájIt's long time<LINE>since we met<LINE>last time!<END05>
Please wait<LINE>before music<LINE>transmitted!<END04>
I have to<LINE>transmit music.<END05>
<CHOICE> Taking over!<END04>
Over!<END05>
Please select<LINE>the place<LINE>saved!<END04>
Saving over!<END05>
The data were<LINE>taken over!<END05>
There are no<LINE>data to save!!<END05>
Music<LINE>transmitting<LINE>can't go on!<END05>
Which e-monster<LINE>need to be <LINE>input skill?<END04>
<60> became<LINE>to be evolved.<END05>
<CHOICE> Evolve?<LINE>  Yes   No<END04>
<60> have<LINE>not evolved!<END05>
<CHOICE> Very good<LINE><END04>
Critical!<END04>
Please 

I'll post them as I get them.

Stuff like "Caught the E-monster!" is the game pretending to be pokemon, I have no idea what the original text would be for this, the denjuu isn't "caught" when the text is displayed, the text displays at the end of most battles.

What would be a proper replacement for "e-magic"?

What is "Please don't strolled on the road!"? :blink:

Help!

EDIT: Added the lot.

Anyone...?

[Blaziken257]

I would help but I know no Japanese. Well, I can probably understand some of the lines, considering that I already changed some of them (and I can see that you used the new patch... hehehe). The changes I made are probably not literal translations; they're just my own interpretation based on the context of the game.

"Attacked, but failed to hit!" really should be self-explanatory.
"Was defeated!" should be "You have been defeated!" or something like that.
"It seems the enemy's mate will late!" should be "It seems that the enemy's Denjuu will be late!" or something like that.

Not sure what e-magic should be. Electricity, perhaps?

[andwhyisit]

I would help but I know no Japanese. Well, I can probably understand some of the lines, considering that I already changed some of them (and I can see that you used the new patch... hehehe). The changes I made are probably not literal translations; they're just my own interpretation based on the context of the game.

"Attacked, but failed to hit!" really should be self-explanatory.
"Was defeated!" should be "You have been defeated!" or something like that.
"It seems the enemy's mate will late!" should be "It seems that the enemy's Denjuu will be late!" or something like that.

Not sure what e-magic should be. Electricity, perhaps?

Or maybe mana, who knows. Unless it is sunlight and Denjuu know solarbeam.

Maybe "mate" is a bad translation for what should be "partner" maybe?

What about "<60>'s<LINE>attack missed."?

Why is there a "<60> is<LINE>paralytic! <END05>" and a "<60><LINE>is paralyzed! <END05>"? Compare

<60> hide!<END05>
<60><LINE>jump!<END05>
<60><LINE>is flying!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>very confused!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>paralytic! <END05>
<60> was<LINE>being cursed!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>asleap!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>afraid!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>surrounded by<LINE>fog!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>hurt by poison!<END05>
The eyes of<LINE><60> can't<LINE>see something<LINE>clearly!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>building the<LINE>barrior!<END05>
<60> burst!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>frostbitten!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>scalede!<END05>

with

<60> hide!<END05>
<60> jumped<LINE>very highly!<END05>
<60> flied<LINE>in the sky!<END05>
<60><LINE>is confused!<END05>
<60><LINE>is paralyzed! <END05>
<60> was<LINE>being cursed!<END05>
<60><LINE>was asleap! <END05>
<60><LINE>was afraid!<END05>
<60><LINE>was surrounded<LINE>by fog!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>hurt by poison!<END05>
<60> closed<LINE>the eyes!<END05>
<60> is<LINE>building the<LINE>barrier!<END05>
The blood-block<LINE>of <60><LINE>swelled!<END05>
<60> was<LINE>frostbitten!<LINE>Defense ability<LINE>fell.<END05>
<60> was<LINE>scalede! Attack<LINE>ability full!<END05>

That is two versions of the same thing within the same file in different locations. :huh:

EDIT: I figured something out. When the "e-magic power" is charging that is DP charging, DP must stand for "denjuu power" by the looks of its translation.

EDIT2:I have revised some stuff

å±ÔâArrived!áStrengthârecovered!áå`ÔâÉå±ÔÊáGot the phoneânumber ofâå`Ô!áå`ÔâÉå±ÔÊáå`Ô wasâdefeated!áààI can't defeatâhim!áå`Ôâescaped!áå`ÔâPlease don'tâstrolled on theâroad!áTook åáÉHPâin damage!áThe denjuuâpower cannotâbe used!áå±Ôâappeared!áThe denjuuâpower begins toâcharge!áå`Ô attackedâå±ÔáChoose yourâDenjuu.áGame OveráCaught theâE-monster!áEscaped!áRegret,âDidn't catch!áYou have been defeated!áåHÔ points lost!áThe enemy wasâbeat down!áThe attack fromâourselves!áå`Ô got åHÔâExp. Points!áå`Ô'sâlevel increased!áå`Ôâevolved!áBecameâå`Ô!áå`Ô'sâattack missed!áAttack whichâDenjuu?áå`Ô usedâå±Ô!áàã Are you sure?â Yes Noáå`Ô didn'tâfollow!áå`Ôâattacked freelyáBarrier edgedâdenjuu powerâout!!áGo! å±Ô!áDidn't escape!áWhich Denjuu'sâpositionâwould you likeâto see?áã Fight Escapeâ StatsáThe speed ofâå`Ôâimproved!áThe accuracyâof å`Ôâimproved!áààThe evasion ofâå`Ôâimproved!áThe attackâability ofâå`Ôâimproved!áThe denjuuâpower ofâå`Ôâimproved!áThe defenseâability ofâå`Ôâimproved!áThe health ofâå`Ôârecovered!áPoison damaged!áFailed!ã å 9áThe skill isânot enough!áã Call partner?â Yes Noáã Decidedâagainst it.álearnt å`Ô!áå`Ôâgot lost!áå`Ô hid away!áå`Ôâjumped!áå`Ôâis flying!áå`Ô isâvery confused!áå`Ô isâparalyzed! áå`Ô isâbeing cursed!áå`Ô isâasleep!áå`Ô isâafraid!áå`Ô isâsurrounded byâfog!áå`Ô wasâhurt by poison!áå`Ôâcannot see clearly!áå`Ô isâbuilding theâbarrier!áå`Ô burst!áå`Ô wasâfrostbitten!áå`Ô wasâscalded!áå`Ôâappeared!áå`Ô landed!áå`Ôâreturned!áå`Ô âregained it'sâsenses!áThe paralysisâof å`Ôâwore off!áThe curse ofâå`Ô wasâreleased!áå`Ô's fogâdispersed!áå`Ô re-âcovered to theâattack state!áThe fog aroundâå`Ôâdisappeared!áThe poison ofâå`Ôâdisappeared!áThe eyes ofâå`Ô can see once more!áThe barrier ofâå`Ô is noâlonger inâforce!áThe blood-blockâof å`Ôâdisappeared!áThe frostbite ofå`Ô wasâcured!áThe burn ofâå`Ôâwas cured!áå`Ô hid away!áå`Ô jumpedâup high!áå`Ô fliedâin the sky!áå`Ôâis confused!áå`Ôâis paralyzed! áå`Ô isâcursed!áå`Ôâis asleep! áå`Ôâis afraid!áå`Ôâis surroundedâby fog!áå`Ô wasâhurt by poison!áå`Ô couldânot see!áå`Ô isâbuilding theâbarrier!áThe blood-blockâof å`Ôâswelled!áå`Ô wasâfrostbitten!âDefense abilityâfell.áå`Ô wasâscalded! Attackâability full!áSave?â Yes NoáThe phone no.âof å`Ôâwas saved!áThe phoneânumber was notâsaved!áI had to beâsomewhereâalong the way.âI will returnâlate! Sorry...áI'm sorry!I gotâlost!I will beâlate!áGot åHÔ Chiru!áIt seems theâenemy's Denjuuâwill be late!áCall åHÔ Denjuu!âSEL- View StatsáThe signal canânot transmit!áI tell you myâphone number!áGot a call fromâåáÉ!áBut, the memoryâwas full andâcan't log on!!áIt's not veryâeffective...áIt's super-âeffective!áå±Ôâwants to fight!áã Waiting forâcommunication!áCommunicationâfailure!áCommunicationâended!áPlease selectâyour partnerâDenjuu!áCommunicationsâmode is wrong!áVS fight can'tâgo on!!áIf VS fight goes on, more than 3âe-monsters willâbe needed!!áVS fight is OKáThe bargainingâcan't go on!áThere are noâDenjuu that canâbe bargained!áBargain is OK!!áThe memory ofâyour D-Shotâis full!!áPlease selectâcommunicationâmode!áPlease select âmusic that needsâto be transmitted!áDid you call me?â Yes NoájIt's long timeâsince we lastâmet!áPlease waitâbefore musicâtransmitted!áI have toâtransmit music.áã Taking over!áOver!áPlease selectâthe placeâsaved!áSaving over!áThe data wereâtaken over!áThere is noâdata to save!!áMusicâtransmittingâcan't go on!áWhich Denjuuâneed to be âinput skill?áå`Ô becameâto be evolved.áã Evolve?â Yes Noáå`Ô failedâto evolve!áã Very goodâáCritical!á

Sorry, I didn't feel like laying it out. Anyway I am wondering if Bargain means Trade or something, it sounds like it but I must be sure.

EDIT3: Hmm.. I guess I'll just use "trade" then if nobody objects.

After I have inserted this text I will test it, finish the rest of the stuff (menu text, money name, evolutionary stages, etc.) and release a patch (hopefully), I may create a second patch that adds all of the Engrish dialogue (assuming I do not succumb to laziness). I hope this will allow everyone to play or hack something that's glitchy-free, even if it still has the engrish text.